It's been pretty normal these days, due to heavy traffic in bangalore; to spend more than 3 hours a day in bus.
Wrote this one during one of my commute to office......
Un jhuki hui palako.N me jaise, Saara jaha.N samete hue;
Us sharmo-haya ke parde me, jaise ik tufaan lapete hue;
Zulfe.N bikhri hai kuchh aise, unke chahere ko ghere hue;
Qayamat hai aayi jaise, ikk parivaash ka roop lete hue.
[parivaash = a beauty, an angelic beauty]
6 comments:
Abd who was the inspiration behind this?
Sarang...
Keep it up man...
haha... neel.... meet me in person ;)
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Nice one sarang.
Badhiya Likhte ho yaar.
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Very pretty design! Keep up the good work. Thanks.
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Sirjee...
Great Work.. I'm highly impressed...
and ur orkut community...
is simple awesome..
keep up the good work.. we r always there to appreciate ur work..
Tejas Chhabra
Just not so famous....
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